April 26, 2012 @ 9:42 am
The Conversation
After you write and perform poetry for a while, you may eventually become restless and ask yourself What’s Next? Life is growth– artist most especially must move forward or die. But what do you move towards?
For some, its music since poetry is lyricism and rap is spoken word, blinged out and outfitted to music.
But what poetry and especially slam is closest to culturally is theater. Years ago a slam poet told me the perfect slam poem is a first person monologue. Was there ever something you didn’t realize was true until you heard it said aloud? That really clicked for me and it changed how I listened to and received slam poetry. Its a form (as much as a sonnet or a villianelle is a form) but its power comes from utilizing the elements of drama.
So it was nice to get me out of the house last night, in a light misting & humid rain to return to the Air Lounge for Mouth Off Wednesdays. Its open to any/everybody but primarily attracts a gorgeous & young african american crowd, all positive & vibrant. There’s a huge open dance floor with seating on padded benches around the L shaped wall. I grabbed a beer from the bar and geared up to listen.
What surprised me about a lot of the open mic was how several people did rhyming couplets. One dude was a kind of master of it, as he flashed back to childhood memories. Then there was the sexually explicit poetry making several of the women vocal and rock in their seats as if they were uprooting themselves. Though I didn’t realize he was doing a live infomercial until he got off stage and passed out flyers and tickets for his venue. Tix were passed down to me and I gazed at the Pleasanton address and 9pm start time. Considering I didn’t have a car the reading may as well been on mars. I passed it to the woman next to me.
The reason I’m writing this is because of the features. Two brothers, both slam veterans, both hosts of open mics who decided to try something different. What they did was weave their poems together into a conversation. First about fatherhood, about dealing with their lady friend’s respective baby daddies, about violence. Some of the poems I’ve heard before, but by weaving their voices together, trading off stanzas, their poems became new. The dynamic duo worked So Well Together it didn’t seem like an experiment as much as a rehearsal. I felt honored to see it.
Over the course of the night, I watched the audience. They listened to earlier performers respectfully, laughed at the stand up comic (who was good though I lost a lot of his words in the less than stellar sound system and his insistance on fellaciating the mic while speeding through his set ups & delivery) and as they kept drinking, gradually started leaking whispers. From where I sat it became hard to hear while people were trying to holla at one another. But I did learn something. The audience Wants to be fed, why they’re there in the first place. They’ll respectfully give you your opening seconds, but if you veer off into shyness, into cliche’s, or just wackness, their attention wanes. The advice I got years ago playing the now closed Chameleon in San Francisco still stands: start strong or you’ll lose them.
The features didn’t start strong so much as explode. The intensity and brilliance of their opening piece, how their voices wove into one another and how they built tension in their narrative, compelled you to listen and, quickly, shut down the entire room to where after their opening couple of minutes… if they just said Thank You & Goodnight, the audience would have been happy and have heard the best performance of the entire night. What they brought to the stage was theatricality. Not a sense of showy-ness, but rather constructing drama and holding attention. Their words were pleas, this wasn’t poetry where we as audience were being told something pretty, but rather they were men pleading their cases with a eloquent passion missing from what the room heard earlier in the open mic.
OK. Save the one elder, a brother who talked about going to New York and performing for residents of Riker’s Island. If you can and want to play Riker’s, you can play ANYWHERE.
What we ultimately were watching was exciting, because there was no telling what was going to happen next. I appreciate that (and maybe coincidentally???) just prior to their performance a woman from the open mic got up and sang a Psalm-style poetic prayer. It was a incredible way of grounding the space and the room in a way the performers didn’t realize.
There was more open mic’ers after the feature’s set– which was kinda unfair to the open mic’ers because… well, anything after that is anti-climactic, and the emotionally intensity stirred by their work is in and of itself to thrilling, it felt like the Whole Reason to be there that night. A half dozen women got up and left as they finished, and I followed them out. The rain had stopped and I walked down to the bus stop, after someone so drunk they made me think of how I walk when I’m drunk: rubberband legs flailing. Someone stumbling past me asking (with eyes afire) if there were any other stores open 24 hours except the magazine store. I barely answered and pushed on to the bus stop– which was fruitless. a 40 minute wait. I called a taxi and the brother who picked me up was from Afghanistan. He asked what I’d been doing that night and when I told him I was at a poetry reading he said when he was younger he read the work of Rumi in its original language(!) and name checked Hafiz. I didn’t expect that. And considering I’d already spent so much money that night (I could have bought a case of beer for what I paid for that one) left him a large tip. I told him: Anyone who mentions Rumi gets huge respect from me.
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