January 7, 2009 @ 4:45 pm
Seven Daughters
What interests me about mythology is how metaphorical storytelling is used to fill holes within the things unknown or that otherwise can’t be explained.
I’m working currently on creating an original story with mythological elements. My first creative attempt, with me meditating on what mythology does well, is the poem Seven Daughters.
Its a unique poem for me; totally fabricated, female-centered, visual and metaphorical. Mother Allula appeared out of nowhere. Am not even sure where her name came from. The River is quite real and is in West Africa.
The poem was inspired by the photograph of an African sculpture. There’s much to be said for the writing exercise of taking a photograph or piece of art and bringing it to life, making it talk. I should do it more often…
The ending– the very last line– is me sampling myself. Years ago I wrote another poem that maintained a chant: “Your spirit is on the outside, the flesh only seed.” The line is totally nonsensical, & contradictory. (I was young when i wrote it, sue me.) When I finally realized what I was trying to say I decided to recycle it here.
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Seven Daughters
every seventh daughter in our clan
gets the call of spirit through her feet
& her nails keep growing despite all
efforts to stop them.
at spring solstice her toenails
would begin swirling
and twisting into brittle roots
sharp as antelope antlers
slicing through bedding, floor, walls
as if reaching for food, for light.
The inaugural event was traced back to
Mother Allula who walked the banks
of the Ogooue, dragging her feet along the
stone road hoping to break them apart
but failing. She waded into the river
kicking fish to shore. She sat on a stone,
pulled her feet towards her mouth,
and chewed her nails loose, spitting
the gray chips to the wind. But by sundown,
she’d rooted in place, too deep for the tribes
strongest wrestlers to unfix her, and drowned
in the blue monsoon her toenails
provided the last ingredient for.
since then, the elders began instructing us
thru dreams to sacrifice cattle
and write poems in blood,
dry their skins into bulbed skirts,
bury ourselves waist deep in coppery
mud, paint our faces in flour and clay
as we petition the gods to free us
until these branched tendrils dissolve into ash
and we learn spirit is our true body
our flesh only seed
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